The writing is about giraffes and we watched a video and the giraffes were doing flips and tricks into the water.
We had to describe what the giraffe were doing and how they looks and the sounds we could here.
It was easy to describe the Giraffes because we watched the video before the writing and we new what giraffes look like.
I found it hard to think about what the write and I write the story with Hazel my friend.
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