we were learning about about what change is and that change is all around you.
I found it easy to think of what I was going to write because the hole cass rote down a brainstorm.
I found It hard to remember to make a gap in between the writing because I always forget.
I really enjoyed writing all my ideas down onto the poem.
Next time I need to think of more ideas to write down.

Hi Olive. I'm Navani and I really adore the background you chose for your poem because I love the colour yellow. I like how you said you can buy new pets for home because I got two new pets one year ago. I think next time you could change your sentence starters because I have realised that you have started most of your sentences with "You Can" Bye Olive.
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